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Release Your Fears

Enter gently into the night release your fears into eternal flight. Let your fears return in daylight full of colors so vividly bright. Follow your chosen path to it's end dream your way to the rainbows end. What once was fear has become your key friend. Unlock the gate from what once held you in. Release it now and let your dreams begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 10:34:00 AM
The imagery of this piece is well suited to the emotions solicited from the author...starting with a sullen bleak look that blossoms into the hope of dreams to explore. Your style is dramatic and conveys feelings well. Emile. #7
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 5/27/2015 2:34:00 PM
Wow! What wonderful comments, Emile and a 7 too. Thank you so very much for taking the time to read my work, it means a lot. God Bless :)
Date: 4/29/2015 5:11:00 PM
Hello Sharon, This one is a quite compelling rhymed write with a definite message of hope with the release of your fears and letting your dreams begin. (I find that sometimes the simple verses can carry more weight when handled well than the longer ones -- depending on the subject to be discussed. I enjoy your write here immensely. Best Always, Gary (And a "7" too!!)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/1/2015 10:40:00 AM
Sharon, no worries. We are all learning together. I know for this current year I will be attempting some poetic forms I've not yet done before. This is the only way each of us can grow and learn and write very well. Have a Great Weekend. It's great to be back with everyone once again. Best Always, Gary
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 5/1/2015 9:39:00 AM
As Always, Thank you so very much for your wisdom and for being so encouraging. I wasn't sure if it could be considered a rhyme or not. Thank you for answering that question so pleasantly for me. It is so wonderful to have a poetic friend and teacher :)....Sharon G. A (7) for you being so nice, finding the time in your busy day to respond. God Bless :)

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