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Release Me Not

Release me not Release me not from the charm Of hearing your exclusive chriping We met by chance On an exclusive dawn Under a velvet sky Whilst the astonished sun Peeped at us through its silky shadow Let your melodious chirping Get merge with the vibrant wind And compose an eternal symphony In my solitary heart Release me not from the story Of your emotional heart Let it breezes On the tender petals of sping flowers And mellowed autumn Let a thousand dreams Colour my fantasy And let me fly unto you On my flapping wings of poesy Release me not Of hearing your exclusive chirping In every dawn In every dawn ~(c) Sukmawati Komala ~ Jan 2013

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Date: 1/7/2014 5:06:00 PM
only a person with alot of passion in their soul could write something so romantic and passionate very well done lady. great work here. cheri
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/19/2014 6:38:00 AM
Thank you deary Cherl...appreciate so much.. i am delighted wiith your beautiful comments.. much love and light :)
Date: 1/4/2014 12:49:00 PM
Sukmawati a beautiful poem very well written, wonderful image……David
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/6/2014 8:46:00 PM
thank you deary David.. such a blessing day to read your lovely comment (y) appreciate so much

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