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And there it was… a rose colored, winding path, a narrow passage, maze like, but easily traversed With a bent nail in the wood, no gate remained, only rusted hinges but beautiful rusted hinges they were I felt their curves and screw heads The post weathered with an enchanting patina, woven in vine of an unknown variety Stone boundaries in earthen shades marked areas and channels where foliage thrived and gladiolas waved like flags in a cool breeze I sat upon the lawn, uninvited but not feeling that way and gazed towards the distant horizon of hills and clouds and green The world was silent except for my breathing, calm lulled me as I floated within my mind I felt the touch of something familiar and I closed my eyes to experience it all She took my hand and said, “relax’ and I did while opening my eyes to find I was here, where I had always been but I wasn’t…and it was because of her

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Date: 11/29/2021 1:17:00 AM
Hi Chris, enjoyed the relaxing sensation brought out by your words, great place to be:)
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Date: 10/10/2021 3:00:00 PM
A journey of improbable beauty, Chris. Spun like shining golden thread. Kudos, Gershon
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Date: 10/10/2021 10:00:00 AM
A dreamy dreamlike poem, thought provoking yet a little intriguing even maybe mysterious for it was because of her, where you had always been,and yet you weren't. Well penned Chris, a great write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
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Date: 10/9/2021 8:14:00 AM
This feels like something in a dream, nice contrasts like 'uninvited/but not feeling that way' and 'I was here.. but I wasn't' - many layers to contemplate~
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Date: 10/8/2021 4:42:00 PM
This reads like a gentle ocean wave very relaxing. The world was silent except for my breathing, calm lulled me as I floated within my mind. Favorite lines. Great work Chris!
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Date: 10/8/2021 11:54:00 AM
I felt calmness wash over me just reading your poem… lovely :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate you kindness.
Date: 10/8/2021 11:26:00 AM
Oh, this is so special and really peaceful too. I felt like I was taken there away from everything. So nice , Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi.
Date: 10/8/2021 11:12:00 AM
Hello Chris, I think you were in a mediate state to feel relaxed. Jpy & peace. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/8/2021 5:52:00 PM
Hello Chris, you are welcome. Enjoy your weekend. Love & Joy.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene

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