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Relatively Creaking

My house has got arthritis, it is seventy years old, and symptoms become noticeable when the weather's turning cold. The kitchen door starts moaning as I go in and out, the roof timbers are groaning when the central heating cuts out. Window frames sigh just like I when getting out of bed, the hinges creak as if to speak of staying closed instead. The skeleton of my bed frame which every night I dream on, calls out when I turn over, asking if I'll rub some cream on. With all of its infirmities as far as I can see, it may cry out and whinge and moan but not as much as me.

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Date: 12/25/2020 2:10:00 AM
Love the humorous note in this one, Viv: Where do I find nettle tea? Ha ha SuZ
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Date: 10/3/2020 10:00:00 AM
Delightful Viv, nettle tea? Yeaaaahhh, I'll bet.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:00:00 PM
Indeedy, James, the old nettle tea three times a day is still keeping me mobile. I don't really moan that much, more poetic license. Hope you're well, stay safe. Regards, Viv
Date: 9/29/2020 2:47:00 PM
ooh makes me feel old mr Viv lol:-) a bit of sunshine and goose grease and we will be fine:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2020 5:44:00 AM
Viv, the story is told that one day as John Adams sat in front of his house a passerby asked him "and how is Mr. Adams today?" to which he answered "Mr. Adams is fine. Mr. Adam's house is falling apart. I wouldn't be surprised if he moved out soon."
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/29/2020 6:48:00 AM
Mines not quite that bad yet, John. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 9/29/2020 2:41:00 AM
Haha enjoyed your verse Viv, hope you're well, apart from a few creaks lol. Tom
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/29/2020 6:49:00 AM
Still soldiering on thanks, Tom, got to thank nettle tea for keeping me going. Regards, Viv

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