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Relationships Waiting to hear Just a word, And a long Day's wait, One glimpse And sun will rise, Longing to meet Maybe few minutes, What a relationship? Soul to soul My dear friend, A life's play Even if you betray, Fine perspective If you are receptive, Time is running out Unending relay, Is it earth and clay? Beyond normal minds Exists a world, Unique ideology Gems and pearls, Not any motive Neither any gain, Beyond calculations Love or bane, If we could catch up? Neither by birth Nor by law, We came close Minds were raw, A God's gift Without any rift, Grew tempestuously Our relationship, Where do we stand now? Written on 25/7/14 Contest- Relationships Sponsor- Regina Riddle Ranked 5th

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Date: 7/29/2014 1:18:00 PM
a very deep poem, and ending line... Dr Upma, a poem well done..Linda
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Date: 7/29/2014 7:55:00 AM
Dr. Upma Relationships are hard to control and keep us going in circles. We never know if they are going to work or break our hearts. Thank you for the nice comment on my Lost For Words poem
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:35:00 PM
Huge congrats on your fine win my friend!!!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/29/2014 3:13:00 AM
Thanks Robert ! Appreciate ur visit n wishes !
Date: 7/28/2014 9:40:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, huge congratulations on your fine well-deserved win. Beautiful write! Pandita
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thnx Pandita!
Date: 7/28/2014 7:51:00 AM
the process of making a relationship, nicely described, Upma, Congrats for the fine win. Mohan
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thnx Mohan!
Date: 7/28/2014 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Dr. Upma. Kika
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thnx Kika my new friend !
Date: 7/28/2014 5:00:00 AM
touchy and heartfelt write, Dr. Upma. Congrats
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 8:56:00 AM
Thnx Dr Ram!
Date: 7/26/2014 12:26:00 AM
Oh! yes, soul's eternal connection.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 8:56:00 AM
Yes dear Vandana !

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