Relationship Tableau
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There’re many roses
In my house garden
But I feel my rose,
the one I’ve watered
Is more important
Than all the roses
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October 17, 2014
Form : Tableau
Dr. Ram Mehta
Fourth Place Win
Contest: Design your Tableau by nette onclaud
I have chosen; 1.“You become responsible forever for what you’ve tamed.”
**Taming meaning to create a relationship**
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The following stanzas are not for the contest:
If you tame someone
You’ll need each other
You’re only for her
And she’s but for you.
You’re responsible
For relationship.
Liability
comes from a sense of
mutuality
Makes life livable.
The giver gets back
a sense of purpose
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Copyright © Dr.Ram Mehta | Year Posted 2014
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