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Relationship- In Love

Relationship- In love Ecstasy or bane, Passion creeps in lovers lane, A deep prick in heart, Betrayal makes you insane, Love makes the whole world go round! Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written September 22nd, 2014 For contest 'Poems or new magazine please' by Little known nothing

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James Fraser

Date: 9/25/2014 4:23:00 PM

Love certainly helps, but harmony is the answer to all. But I hear ya Upma, James.....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/23/2014 7:42:00 PM

ahhh love the bane and cure all aye? Light & LOVE my friend

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 4:00:00 PM

Great Tanka Dr. Sharma. Good luck in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/23/2014 2:11:00 PM

Love is a battlefield my, dearest Dr. Upma, where tender hearts are bound to suffer the most! An excellent deep poem that captivates the heart and mind! Good luck!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/23/2014 9:26:00 AM

Excellent! This was a joy to read.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2014 11:37:00 PM

yes, you captured the good and bad of it!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/22/2014 1:18:00 PM

tanka and rhyme so well-rendered, dr. upma.. I'm in love with this one!.. huggs