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Tiptoe into my room and hide behind the curtain; You wait to slither onto me and be my demon. You lurk in the shadows waiting to pounce upon me; You seek to capture my soul, and you do so through my body. Hallucination or reality, you make it hard to comprehend; you show me a starting line on the dead end. Tearing through my flesh you bruise my bones; clenching on my nerves, you make my sanity moan. Flowing through my veins, you want to poison me; suffocating my being, with your invisible brutality. Would you make me yours and never let go; Or would you destroy me and throw me down the road?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/1/2015 11:54:00 PM
Amrita, Congratulations in Thomas Martin's contest. SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2015 5:17:00 AM
Thank you SKAT! :D
Date: 8/1/2015 11:36:00 PM
Well penned agony of many Amrita! Look forward to reading more of u dear! Very warm welcome n big congrats on ur top placement!
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Date: 8/1/2015 4:42:00 PM
Very nice. Well-deserved placement.
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Date: 6/27/2015 3:21:00 AM
I love this so much!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you all for the encouraging comments :)
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:27:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Amrita ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2015 12:49:00 PM
Its good indeed , and that's really dark I like it
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Date: 6/9/2015 10:56:00 AM
Amrita, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/9/2015 10:20:00 AM
Amrita, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:51:00 PM
well done Amrita for expressing one's fears well in your first poem on PS. hope to see more of your poems. best. Mohan
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Date: 6/8/2015 2:15:00 PM
Hi Amrita, welcome to PoetrySoup. I like your poem. You express yourself well.
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