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Rejuvenating Rains

Feeling lost... I close my eyes And inhale The rising storm Gentle rhythm Into drops Freefalls upon acceptance From quickened sky Liquid softs Liquid grace Crying tears Caressing face The thunder claps Echoes an epiphany As essence liberates Alas Spirit free To fly at last Rushing ways Are souls being cleansed Soaking up the cool... Rejuvenating rains

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/29/2012 3:51:00 PM

I can certainly relate to your poem Michael. I have a love of rain and am always thrilled when it begins raining. Here in the islands of course the rain is warm and refreshing.You have written a really wonderful poem that touches the soul. I have another called Crystal Rain, I posted some time ago. Thank you also for your nice comments and very nice to meet you. I will check out more of your poetry.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2011 10:51:00 AM

Michael congratulations on this beauty in the contest ;-)

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 10:49:00 AM

Lovely Rhyme, Michael. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations Michael, on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 9:03:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest, Michael

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/17/2011 7:42:00 AM

Congrats my freind... such a good write.. Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2011 7:38:00 AM

Congrats Michael on your HM in rain contest with this wonderful write and creativity luv..enjoy honor..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2011 2:40:00 AM

Michael, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d