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Rejection

Days ago I had a dream, It made me an extreme, It suited for my theme, So I made it as my beam. One day I saw a beauty, She broke my beam cruelty, I wanted to call her "My cutie", So I made her as my duty. I proposed her by craving, But she leave me hanging, Again I went to her with something, But finally I became nothing. I tried to blow her totally, But I failed frequently, I tried to build my beam newly, But I failed repeatedly. In this beatiful morning, Ceaselessly Im mourning, Go and command my darling, To kill me without hurting.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2016 10:54:00 AM

Thank you Also.much for the reply to my welcome comment. Linda

Chanuka Niroshan

Date: 5/21/2016 3:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend, and i want tell you all my story, that im not a poet even i haven't read a poem since yesterday... day before yesterday i proposed my girlfriend but she rejected me..so when im in sad cease to failure, I got these ideas then i wrote it in paper...after reading it two three times I just wanted to tell my poem for someone, but there was no one to hear..so i posted it in Poetry Soup, Now im just happy and feeling free because of you!

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 12:34:00 AM

Chanuka Niroshan, FA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Chanuka Niroshan
Date: 5/21/2016 3:50:00 AM

Moon Flower

Date: 5/20/2016 10:19:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Chanuka. :)

Chanuka Niroshan
Date: 5/21/2016 3:50:00 AM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2016 7:06:00 AM

Chanuka,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Chanuka Niroshan
Date: 5/21/2016 3:51:00 AM