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Girl professes love; boy runs bashfully

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 2:51:00 PM

Another little gem from you Caro!...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/21/2011 12:51:00 PM

A very insightful write, Carolyn. And a win in Sweetie's contest too! Yes, I once tried to send out congrats to everyone who'd won in each contest - and I was here for several hours. Phew! As you say, the pop ups slow things down and having to type in the characters on the Captcha thingy is seriously time consuming. So glad your eagle won - as you joked at the time, I'd love to see the result if it got together with my seagull LOL. I think my seagull materialised yesterday - 'splat' on my shoe!

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/1/2010 8:22:00 PM

That's they way it happens so many times. Clever write.

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 4/28/2010 1:38:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/27/2010 7:14:00 AM

congrats to you dear Carolyn on your win! and thank you so much for your kind congrats also, very sweet of you and sincerely appreciated. love, shar

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/25/2010 12:12:00 PM

Sweet poem, Carolyn. I love it. Congrats in the contest too. Love, Destiny

James Fraser

Date: 4/24/2010 5:14:00 PM

Sweet poem Carolyn, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2010 4:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Carolyn. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 4/24/2010 10:08:00 AM

Yeah, and man too! The older dat man get, the faster that suckah run. Great write, dear Carolyn. Love, Dave

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/24/2010 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, my friend..And thanks for your comments left for me...it does mean a lot...hugs, Jimmy

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/23/2010 11:41:00 PM

reminds of a guy i once knew.a while after, i did.he ran without a word. your poems explains this topic so well. good luck Carolyn. -Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2010 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations with yours, sweetie. I see it is just above mine on the list! Luv, Andrea

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/23/2010 8:13:00 PM

Congratulations on the win my friend,,this usually happens to me ,,only in reverse,,,happened alot in high school,,and thank you for all the wonderful wrods that you leave behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..Cecil

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/23/2010 7:54:00 PM

Congratulations Carolyn!! This is one of my favs.! Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 5:14:00 PM

Congrats Carolyn on your success in my "First Love" contest with this lovely Epigram..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 2:49:00 PM

Interesting write...He wasn't ready for any kind of relationship was he...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2010 8:30:00 AM

I bet this has happened to young girls and boys everywhere! Oh dear....those painful first crushes!! :) Well done, Carolyn! Good luck!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2010 7:58:00 AM

Good one, Carolyn!!!

James Peranteau

Date: 4/23/2010 7:01:00 AM

Beautiful Carolyn ! I love the idea here ! james

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 5:41:00 AM

Hi, Carolyn! I have worked in Sri Lanka in the 1980ies and travelled also to Indonesia. Planting rice is a hard job for the women in these countries. I also like rice especially the Indian way. I use a lot of curry and spices in my cooking too. curcuma, which gives curry the yellow colour is a root (similar to ginger) and should be good to fight cancer....Wishing you a great weekend...Love, Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 5:30:00 AM

Yes, Carolyn, English and German are quite close and the dialect spoken in the north of Germany is very similar to English and it's called "Platt". vicunas are a smaller species than lamas, more like alpacas, but even smaller. They are roaming wild in the Andean region. I lived in Chile for a few years and also in Antofagasta in the early 1960ies and visited the Atacama Desert quite often when working at the university. Have a great weekend..Love Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 4:49:00 AM

Cute one

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 4:08:00 AM

Short, but nicely written, Carolyn! Thank you for your kind comments! I will post my poems bi (or even tri) lingual on soup. Good luck for the contest and have a great weekend...Love, Gert

Sean Kelly

Date: 4/23/2010 3:48:00 AM

The first hot-blush of youth . Great short piece and best of luck , Calolyn in the contest ...

Lady Valentine

Date: 4/23/2010 2:44:00 AM

even though this was short and simple it was beautifully writen i get the point because its very straight forward good work hun :)