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Reign of Acorns

The reign of acorns Falling from the skies From the skies Dominating, dominating Ruining my life But, not hers As she dances upon them Crushing, crushing Smiling, smiling A youthful girl still in her mind Thus, the reign of acorns Ending, ending Beneath her rule And under winter's thumb Of autumn's welcome demise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/5/2012 4:52:00 PM
the gaiety of fall lilts to poetic heights thorugh this remarkable piece... enjoyed the compare-contrast approach between you and your girl, michael... shimmering!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/28/2012 3:41:00 PM
I loved how you used the double entadre rain/reign..we are of a mind today thinking of the joy of falling ;) Light & Love [7 & fav]
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:09:00 PM
excellent Michael..... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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