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Regretting Cake

I ate that cake on my 100 birthday choked on it, now for my soul you doth pray who put the nuts in, they should pay for causing me to die, in this unhealthy way looking down at you, all I can say.....is thank goodness at last, I got away. penned August 10 2016

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Date: 8/15/2016 8:01:00 AM
Congrats Seren, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:52:00 AM
Congrats well done x
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Date: 8/14/2016 9:28:00 PM
Very clever and made me smile, Seren. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/15/2016 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, ...Seren
Date: 8/14/2016 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/15/2016 12:41:00 AM
Hi Kim thanks for commenting......Seren
Date: 8/14/2016 2:53:00 PM
Seren, congrats on your placement with this very cute poem! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2016 12:43:00 AM
lol Thanks Laura was just a fun piece....Seren
Date: 8/14/2016 2:41:00 PM
You're complaining at 100! -- and, how old is he?! Congrats on your placement. ;-)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/15/2016 12:46:00 AM
old and past it too i guess.... Haha Tom i enjoyed writing the nonsense......Seren
Date: 8/11/2016 10:03:00 PM
Hey you cant be murdered twice!!!!! Great write!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/15/2016 12:50:00 AM
you cant keep a good girl down............Seren
Date: 8/11/2016 2:33:00 AM
Sure made me smile Seren a unique take on the contest - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2016 12:47:00 AM
thank you Jan.....Seren
Date: 8/11/2016 12:58:00 AM
I absolutely love it! Cheers, applause - great laugh (I could hear it) ... CayCay
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/11/2016 1:09:00 AM
Thanks CayCay glad you laughed, hmm was it you?? Lol Seren

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