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Regretting Cake

Cake was desirable, And so deliciously dreamy, People were attracted emotionally, Using it when they felt down, Hiding their dark secret from others, Feeling guilty about their indulgences, Uncontrollable affairs, Enticing and mesmerizing Entrapping people with sweet charm, Candlelit nights secluded rendezvous, Passionate words spoken, Entrapping with taste, Sometimes disguising, With different dressings, But was the most appealing, When covered in cream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/6/2016 11:52:00 AM
Interesting, having a message with so many wheels. I wish you the best in the contest
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/6/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Funom x
Date: 8/6/2016 10:08:00 AM
Delightful! Regretting cake?...hmm...there is always dieting and repentance:) More cake!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/6/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank you from one cake fan to another xxxx
Date: 8/6/2016 10:05:00 AM
A seduction by taste...Very nice write Wendy....Can I have a slice of that chocolate cake?...
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/6/2016 10:26:00 AM
I'm too busy just now I'm eating my cake LOL Thanks wendy
Date: 8/4/2016 3:00:00 PM
- .... multiple layers of cream, Wendy ..... hope it is juicy inside and win the contest - Great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/5/2016 3:24:00 PM
Yummy but heartburn to finish xxxx
Date: 8/4/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you, Victor, I'm just a plain cook nothing fancy, I could make a chocolate cake, or a nice chicken dinner, roast potatoes, yorkshire puddings. xxx
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Date: 8/2/2016 4:39:00 PM
wonder if it was whipped cream lol - great take on the contest Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/2/2016 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Jan it's funny xx
Date: 8/2/2016 3:34:00 PM
Great take on the contest Wendy. I too, prefer the icing. LOL
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/2/2016 3:48:00 PM
Creamy lol x thanks
Date: 8/2/2016 2:49:00 PM
I like this piece of personification, Wendy. Unusual perspective. Good luck with the contest. Barry
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