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All alone in the dark I hear ghastly screaming Unaware if it’s in here I pray I’m only dreaming Fumbling with the light I quickly look to see The skeletons in my closet Are staring back at me I can hear their pain A faint hollow sound Affraid they’ll never fade And decide to stay around Back to haunt my life I can’t escape their hate Another sleepless night Spent dwelling on my fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 5:50:00 PM
You are putting it in the right places. I remember this one too and it is coooool. The form is rhyme, by the way. Here, you will find excellent poets( Im not among them..haha) that will encourage and direct you in any way they can. Again...great to see you here. Look out! Phill Souza just showed up!
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/12/2012 9:48:00 AM
Thanks a lot Caleb, For your review,and for helping me along the way !
Date: 6/11/2012 5:11:00 PM
nice write Phil,clean out your closet lol
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/12/2012 9:49:00 AM
lol Thank you Richard,I appreciate the Review !
Date: 6/11/2012 2:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne ,I appreciate your comment !
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:11:00 AM
You do it well Philip. - Poem number 2 - like it a lot - well written - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/11/2012 9:54:00 AM
lol,Thanks a lot for taking your time to read my poem W.D. !
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Date: 6/11/2012 7:49:00 AM
Wow. I often throw the door wide open and dance with my skeletons, after all we have shared a lifetime. Thank you
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Philip Souza
Date: 6/12/2012 9:52:00 AM
Thank You W. D. For your review,I appreciate it
Date: 6/11/2012 6:52:00 AM
I'm new to the site my name is Phil,hope I am putting my poetry in the right places, trying to learn the site,Thank you
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