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Regret

You spent more time At her grave than you Did at home with her When she could breathe And her heart could beat So I'm not sure which One you liked more; Her brown eyes or The brown wood her Coffin was made of. June, 2015. M.K.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/29/2015 5:44:00 PM
Great lines to question... The sincerity of a devotion... Ha, is the regrets displayed.... Over brown eyes or brown wood indeed!
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Date: 9/16/2015 5:28:00 AM
short and powerful poem that reminds how precious is a life while living.
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Melisha Kaur
Date: 9/16/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for such a nice comment. Your comment on this poem and my other one really made my night. I really appreciate the nice words.

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