Regret

Day after day my life leaves me shattered I’m beginning to forget that things once mattered Crawled in a ball, there’s leaks down my face I fear one might enter my snug hiding place I’m burning out, I’m losing my glow Curious people, text me ‘hello?’ ‘Their liars!’ I scream in my blackened head Rose red stains out the soul that has bled Regret leaves me shattered, stabbed in the heart Now I’m broken in pieces, I’ve been torn apart I’ve tried to move on since you said goodbye But was as all of our love just a cold empty lie?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/24/2024 8:27:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:51:00 PM

Bellise, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 2:32:00 PM

:) SKAT

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/14/2015 9:58:00 AM

G'day Bellise, like those below I would like to welcome you to Poetry Soup. This however doesn't make my reason for visiting any easier. You have entered this Great poem above into my Haibun contest. However this poem is not a Haibun. You will find a link to pages of definitions of poetry forms, above. Anyway, like I said a good engaging poem, that I enjoyed reading, but as it not a Haibun it will not be getting past round 2. Next time maybe.

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 12:13:00 AM

Hi Bellise, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2015 11:35:00 PM

Bellise, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@