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Regret

Heavily tread, are those small fractious steps On the stairs to my own peace of mind The sound of transgressions that I'd rather forget is the pounding of a most clamorous kind The dialogue I hold deep within myself drums on the door of the closed minded truth I try to rewrite scripts, shove them back on the shelf But the turbulence shakes them loose No matter, how buried, how deep I will hide them My conscience can shovel them out That child that is me denies what was done then But can't deafen the voices that shout I profess to regret many sins I've committed The most difficult task is the one of admitting _________________________________________________ For the Contest: "Regret" sponsored by Black Eyed Susan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/17/2013 8:13:00 PM
you did well in Susan's Regret contest... luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 8/17/2013 11:58:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Carrie...Congrats on your win....It is well deserved....
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Date: 8/17/2013 12:24:00 AM
Congrats Carrie ....Seren
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:32:00 PM
very DEEP, Carrie!!! I don't regret too many things so this was a hard contest for me and I took it in a different direction from what Susan must have wanted. BIG congrats. you really captured the essence.
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Date: 8/15/2013 4:06:00 AM
- Your thoughts ... I can recognize them. - Well done Carrie!- Luck in contest, hope this win! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 8:33:00 AM
Admission, the 1st step. The most difficult one. Strong emotional power to this!
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Date: 8/13/2013 3:54:00 PM
i think everyone can relate to this poem. well done!
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Date: 8/13/2013 3:33:00 PM
wishing you luck in the contest... have a good day Carrie... LINDA
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Date: 8/13/2013 3:31:00 PM
um I feel your powerful regret so well done as you always do wonderful Carrie! Laura :)
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