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each grain of sand, every molecule has rested on Earth since time began raindrops now fall and dampen my hair once part of waves rushing through mom's hands a universal tie binds us all without exception, we are matter comprised of resources long existing our consciousness? part of this batter our self-destructive mannerisms serve but to rearrange elements ashes to ashes and dust to dust will come to pass in a greater sense every particle has its own place in both our todays and tomorrows for each bridge built, each new life born from our world's past has something borrowed

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Date: 7/13/2010 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in the “Anything Goes!” contest with this beautiful poem. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:13:00 PM
congratulations carolyn on your lovely poem :D
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:06:00 PM
I can read so much into this poem that it makes me smile big style. Not having read the poems entered in Deborah's contest, I feel I should as this piece is simply wonderful. To your fav's James, you bet > many congratulations Carolyn for this back to earth piece for Semaj to enjoy >> James,xxxx
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:45:00 PM
Astute write dear Carolyn ! One poem that should be caught between the cover and first page of a bible ! *smiles* Have a great night ! james
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:31:00 PM
Carolyn, this poem reminds me of "The law of the conservation of energy..." sounds familiar! And then there are my views that tie in as well. God created the order in the universe...the energy and its functioning...and us. We are all part of His light, His atoms, His energy, His electrons. We are as is everything in our universe, because of Him. Our Heavenly Father, God. Nice insights in this poem to make one think. Thanks for sharing. Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent work in this gem Carolyn. Thank your for your gracious comments. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/8/2010 5:55:00 AM
Very profound and thought evoking, Carolyn. Congratlations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/8/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest Carolyn!
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Date: 7/8/2010 5:22:00 AM
quite an awesome philosophical write Carolyn. so much truth, beautifully expressed. warmest congrats on your win - and thanks so much for your thoughtful comment. hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:37:00 PM
VERY wise ,this poem is, CArolyn. Very well done! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:56:00 PM
Yes, we are universally bound together without exception...I love that line. Great write! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work, but please note that my name is not Chris. (I will answer to "Hey you" sometimes...lol)
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Date: 7/6/2010 1:56:00 PM
Carolyn, I absolutely love this piece.. Has to go into my fav list, love Wilma
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:40:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:48:00 AM
so very true gal! tweak the 4th line at the very least..remove the "that" ;)...oh does dreaded that's!!!! LOL and I see you have a period aversion..but okies...all cap's in line beginning NO periods..I'll deal LOL
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:19:00 AM
Great write, Carolyn! The Buddhists have their wheel with no beginning and no end, a continued life cycle! Ejoyed your poem today and thank you for all your kind comments on my poetry...Love, Gert
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:32:00 AM
... o, Caro-lyn, dear! you voice recasts those unseen intents of nature & creation which the proud bluffs of humanity refuse to acknowledge ... all is lost that is gained! & of course what comes as new, beautyfuk or excellent, has been of old & has been ad-judged like rags ... what we find is the NEWNESS OF THE OLD!!! ride on ...Canny
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