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Regal Revival

auburn, golden crunching leaves - orchestra ears adore much cinnamon fine breeze sweeping away dullness - beginnings await eagerly hearts desiring to breathe afresh - rustle, roll, regal, revival

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2023 3:59:00 AM

Creative lines penned. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Welcome to soup. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/8/2023 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations! Well deserved win

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 11/9/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Ink.. I really didn't expect to win my first contest here on Poetry Soup. I am so honoured.

Karen Croft

Date: 11/8/2023 8:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 11/9/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you so much..

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/4/2023 8:54:00 PM

a pleasure to read - thank you for sharing

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 11/5/2023 9:05:00 PM

Thank you for reading and appreciating my take..

Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 6:50:00 AM

Oh this is so beautiful island twilight, if this for the contest though you should not mention your name in the poem section as its not allowed. Otherwise this flows with so beautiful imagery! It makes me so happy to see you writing tryng these forms and sharing. I am in awe of the last line, exquisite diction and also alliterations! Goodluck for the contest! You’ve nailed it really

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 10/29/2023 11:38:00 AM

Aww thank you so much dear Ink.. appreciate you and your support so much. And oh I didn't know about that rule for not mentioning name. Thanks much for letting me know.

Silent One

Date: 10/29/2023 6:41:00 AM

Oh three brilliant monoku, each one with its own unique imagery.. nice arrangement of words... nice colours.. my favourite is the first one, auburn, golden crunching leaves - orchestra ears adore much... Good luck in the contest sister.

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 10/29/2023 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much brother, appreciate your support so much.. really honored with your feedback. Good luck to you too for the contest.