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Refreshing Rain

Rain dives down onto land Grass oceans and even sand Gently falls upon my hand My reflection in the raindrop Who is this I see Tiny little drops of rain Created high up in the sky In the clouds is where it lies Cleanses planet earth Soon after its birth Washes away evil and sin Gives one a sense of refreshment Planet earth is truly a blessing Wash away all earth's pain Earth. Please. Wash away my sins Let the water rain down on me Replenish myself to start a new Slight regret gives off a sense of weight Heavy on my shoulders I carry this around But I must accept my sins to set myself free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/19/2013 3:13:00 PM
That last line is a very vital line and key to self-renewal & growth. A very promising writing. Nicely done & great to meet you, Alyssa! :)
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