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Reflex Reactions

What activates my reflex arc And causes me to shiver? Which stimuli come into play To set my nerves aquiver? At home alone at dead of night A creak will make me skittish. My lower lip begins to drop In fashion quite un-British! * And should I inadvertently Whilst in the garden walking, Be tickled by a spider's web The shock will leave me balking. Don't mention snakes and darting bats Obnoxious smells and vermin, Or scraping sound as chalk meets board, For all will leave me squirming. In other matters I am bold; No lily-livered chicken. But when sheer instinct rules the roost It leaves my senses stricken. * in contrast to the traditional British 'stiff upper lip' 08.06.19 'What makes you flinch poetry contest' Sponsored by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 6/16/2019 3:36:00 PM
Hi Wendy: You summed up the word flinch with your cleverly worded poem. Bravo!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/16/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give kind feedback,Ralph.
Date: 6/12/2019 1:26:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Your writing style is remarkable. I loved this. Well done. Panagiota Romios
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/16/2019 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for such an encouraging comment, Panagiota. I sound like such a wimp, don't I ?!
Date: 6/11/2019 3:20:00 PM
Love it Wendy - my sort of style. Humor with pathos. Well done.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/12/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and giving this encouraging feedback,Robert.
Date: 6/10/2019 9:33:00 AM
That is very funny. Good luck in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/12/2019 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Kai. I'm glad it raised a smile!

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