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Reflections On a Virginia Summer Night

At the entrance of evening, the melting sun slowly drips over the treetop horizon; Beckoning the moon to peek through the opaque shades As lazy winds play tag with the heated night. The staccato symphony of horny crickets pervade the scene Piercing the stoical still silence with melodic sounds. Weighed eyes and muffled ears grow weary… Retreating the scene and its sounds. Sleep, the stranger of the day, threatens familiarity: None can avoid her acquaintance. Unable to complete, I slip into the twilight of dreams Knowing not if I shall greet tomorrow here. God willing and Earth’s water baptize my eyes, maybe, Just maybe, I will rise to fight another day. So in this twilight dim, I pray my childhood Prayer to Him: " Now I lay me down to sleep. I pray the Lord my soul to keep. If I should die before I wake; I pray the Lord my soul to take."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2016 4:46:00 PM
Brings back my own memories of Virginia Beach.
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:26:00 AM
Underlies the whole poem a strain of pain that fills a sensitive reader's psyche.
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/15/2016 12:27:00 PM
Such is the nature of the world we live in today. Those of us who care, must continue to work to make it a better place as we pass this way. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe. Thank you for the read and feedback.
Date: 2/14/2016 11:03:00 PM
I like the poem, especially how you viewed natural sounds as music to your ears. :)
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/15/2016 5:21:00 AM
Thanks John. Isn't the music of nature amazing?! Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
Date: 2/14/2016 11:18:00 AM
You write from your heart. Keep it up
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/14/2016 1:08:00 PM
Thanks, Franklin. I shall continue to do.
Date: 2/14/2016 7:28:00 AM
I love how you write environment. Well done.
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/14/2016 1:10:00 PM
Naive Poet, honored that you have read and appreciated another poem of mine. Once again, thanks for your feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
Date: 1/7/2015 7:22:00 PM
WOW! Outstanding imagery!This gave me such a feeling of peace and calm - Its a 7 and going into my faves:-)
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/14/2016 1:14:00 PM
Jan, much thanks to you. May the Peace and Love of The Most High continue to abide with you. M. Lowe.

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