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Reflection's of the Soul.

The world is my mirror, it reflects a man not yet made, so much pain and suffering reside, it will not change till I change inside, acknowledge what I am, an inflated ego, in denial of my true self, my sentient being suffocated by lies, this is the reflection I see, this is what is inside of me, and little by little the ego crumbles away and is buried by all of its crutches unfulfilled, the reflection changes with not one soul killed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2010 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Lance. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/31/2010 9:27:00 AM
Congrats Lance on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest .. way to go ... good luck...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. GBU. Ernilando
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Lance. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:07:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 5:14:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about here. I really like the last two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:53:00 PM
Lance, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:36:00 AM
Wonderful and deep writing. You make the reader think and it's appreciated. :) xo
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:26:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Lance. Please continue with your writing and keep sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2010 8:11:00 PM
I find this a profound and inspirational write that gives the reader hope. You write very honestly and truthfully. The world indeed is our own mirror. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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