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Reflections From My Window (Miami To Los Angelles 2001)

Passing through towns Backdrops in blue Lonely times Engulf my thoughts Welcoming back you. Suns pierce so clear through these brilliant days Breeze like boys Run dancing, Through girls Like trees that sway I often wonder What you're thinking Do you share such times as these? Do you stop But for a moment only to think about me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2009 7:41:00 PM
i went through some of you're poems. this is one of my favorites that i've read. especially lines 8-11.
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Date: 5/27/2009 10:11:00 AM
Momentary Pause..title sugestion....try to use a differnant word for "Sun" or "sunny" ...bright would ..bring you to the "b's" on the next line nicely! Light & Love
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