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Reflections

Thoughts unbidden come to mind When I reflect upon the day Feelings new and strange I find Whence they come I cannot say When I reflect upon the day My musings manifest as sounds Whence they come I cannot say A chorus of my love abounds My musings manifest as sounds The melody of living A chorus of my love abounds By the practice of forgiving The melody of living In a composition whole By the practice of forgiving As I seek within my soul In a composition whole Feelings new and strange I find As I seek within my soul Thoughts unbidden come to mind Darrin Funk

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Date: 12/14/2010 12:32:00 AM
Many congrats Darrin on winning coveted spot in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Darrin in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:02:00 AM
Oh, this is very good. I read this several times and found each time, more and more to learn about forgiveness. Thank you for this poem and congratulations on your win in the pantoum contest.
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Date: 12/12/2010 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your 6th Place Win in the contest, Darrin! Enjoy!! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/12/2010 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:39:00 AM
I'm feeling the melody every day, in every moment.
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:33:00 AM
I like the way you feel the "melody" as you go through life, Darrin. A great pantoum! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 7:22:00 AM
Congrats Darrin on your winning poem in Paula's Pantoum contest with this wonderful write and win .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Darrin
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Date: 11/21/2010 3:49:00 PM
It's quite a perfect Pantoum with nice theme and nice rhyming, Darrin
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