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My dreams are bright feather light at night conditions right Carefree Mind free Life's challenges to be won Feeling warmth from noonday sun I dream of water floating boating with Dad Sparkle Lake water ripples Lost Dad Double nickels Still sad Memory trickles I dream of sky Fly High Cropduster Single prop Big John Name drop Macho swagger Li’l Baby Taildragger I dream in hues greens, blues Love so true dancing with you Faces aglow manhattans flow Bummer— Need a drummer Low-rent venues party continues I dream less bright feather light at night conditions right Carefree Mind free As when I was young Colder now in the setting sun

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Date: 7/12/2022 3:47:00 AM
Great poem. Dreams are always incredible. Some good and others not so good. I like it. Blessings always!
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/12/2022 10:02:00 AM
It is so much better when we dream! I appreciate your stopping by, Joseph.
Date: 10/17/2021 6:27:00 PM
Truly a kaleidoscope of life's images in colors & brief bursts of hardships & memories...lightly displayed, deeply written Mark, good work!
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/18/2021 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, James. You’ve made my day!
Date: 10/10/2021 5:58:00 AM
Very well written Mark.! I hope all is well :)
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/10/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi. All is well. I hope all is well with you and yours!

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