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Reflection of Self

swaying with vibe , as i move like the ocean, relaxing into a deeper trance ,, my mind falls off the beaten road and i am not who i used to be.. thought's of death cloud my mind,, like the night my uncle used the 44 barrel to end his fate... darkness clouds around me,, and i see someone at the end of the hell gazed street and i couldn't fathom who it was,, and when i started to run after who i thought it was he kept stretching further from my grips ,, i could hear my heart pounding and i started to cry and then everything became slow motion.................. and then he turned around..... it was me...... i woke up

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Date: 6/22/2011 1:27:00 AM
chilly write man.
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:24:00 PM
You had me in suspense, Jacob. Didn't expect the twist at the end. Great work! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:13:00 PM
JACK, DID YOU JUST JOIN THE SOUP YESTERDAY~~ JUST A QUESTION! YOUR REFLECTION ON A WATER BED ,, VERY DEEPPPPP AND THE IMAGE IS VERY GRIPPING LIKE YOUR POET SELF.. BY THE WAY, IF YOU CAN ALSO READ POET BLOGS HERE TO FIND OUT ABOUT THE POETS HERE. I ALSO SEND YOU SOUP MAIL.. THANKS,..P.D.
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:06:00 PM
Yes, and thank you 4 chkng mine too. sad aren't we
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