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Reflection

Today I sat by the lake... The waters reflecting each and everything including me................ For a moment I felt my reflection was my soul... Full of waves unclear and disturbed.... Trying to find myself in those disturbed waters I looked and looked for me Then with a hope I got up Someday I will be back here Someday the waters would be still and my reflection would be clear.... I hope!!! I hope!!!

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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/25/2012 8:10:00 AM

Water in motion, its reflections are still evident but are fractured into wiggly lines that distorts your image. But still water can be difficult to see what is reality and what is reflection. Irfana it's an expressive write. Thank you for sharing, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2012 5:48:00 PM

this is a wonderful reflective poem better than mine!! and I bet it does well in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2012 10:00:00 AM

Hello again, I wrote another poem which this one has inspired. I hope you will enjoy. Have a great weekend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2012 9:10:00 AM

Water is one of the most amazing elements on earth, soft to the touch yet powerful beyond imagination. I am glad your soul is water and I am happy to have your words soak into my heart. Well done

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/24/2012 2:09:00 PM

Good entry! we change so much it really doesn't matter what we look like..it is who we are that matters ;) Light & Love