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Reflection

Whose face is in the mirror? A facsimile without a spirit Caught for just a moment Turns away re-appearing Whenever I'm near My undeniable twin Other half, innocent Of the day's deed Pure as polished glass What feats can he perform As I flex my soft muscles And observe his wrinkled face There's a soldier With gritty countenance Worn leather skin Has braved life's campaign Still sees sunshine Everywhere, in all he does A heart full of gratitude For this precious gift My face in the mirror, Sir My face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/22/2010 2:53:00 PM
Well-written. Very well written James
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:34:00 AM
Our spirits and emotions are very complex, James. There are many times I don't recognize that face in the mirror. But your "soldier" perseveres and finds beauty in the world around him. A very insightful poem. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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