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Reflection

I stand upon a time on footed thought, regret, I want to make my path clear from obstacles, neglect. Seeds full grown by my hand that sowed to plough, I could have done much better but what can I do now? Forgiveness we all welcome, sorry an easy clause, it's far to late and overdue when knocking at deaths doors.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/18/2008 7:34:00 AM
I like your 'clause/doors' rhyme, and your last two lines particularly. Excellent message well expressed... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/12/2008 6:08:00 AM
Excellent write in this piece. In the last stanza third line is that suppose to be to or too? I am digging your talent and voice.
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:08:00 AM
Excellent poem Ann we reap what we sow your comments are appreciated would love your insight on mypoems. Michael Torres
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