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Reflecting

I swim rivers to rivers I think upon my challenging routine I reflect upon my life I splash puddle to puddle I reflect upon my blurred future…so— I set my mind on those days… I trekked building to building I caught myself thinking of cheery times That’s when I had hope in mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/19/2011 10:24:00 AM
Ahh, the beauty of reflection. This is why it's so vital to never forget where you are today by remembering where you were. Awesome job, David!
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Date: 7/23/2012 2:06:00 PM
Yeah! :) Exactly thankx for the comment!
Date: 11/13/2011 10:55:00 PM
very deep.. i think the cheerful thoughts are the best out of every thought possible... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2011 11:31:00 PM
True that!- thanks for commenting! :D

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