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In all things of nature there is something of the marvelous." Aristole
I marvel at her dance, such fair charmer reeling graciously on new daylight’s pulses— radiant the waltz , the swing pirouetting among blossoms; while flappers ride over lush treetops only to v a n i s h… in thick evergreen. >>>o<<< For Dear Heart's Etheree Contest Written 5/21/2020 Checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 5/28/2020 10:30:00 AM
Nette, beautifully penned and lovely image. Congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2020 1:34:00 PM
That "reeling graciously" imagery brought back a memory of ballet dancing. Beautiful imagery Nette. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 5/25/2020 10:25:00 AM
Lovely imagery..Great win Nette..
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Date: 5/24/2020 5:18:00 PM
Delightful movement you've created. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/24/2020 4:36:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/24/2020 4:26:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your charming Etheree, Nette. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 5/24/2020 10:49:00 AM
How awesome - your butterfly charms your readers whilst 'pirouetting among blossoms' Good luck in the contest Nette - a beautiful poem. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/21/2020 7:14:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, dear lady. It should be a winner for sure. God bless you and Love to you, Gina
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:20:00 PM
Lovely...you wrote the dance of the butterfly...
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:01:00 PM
This is indeed a charmer, I love the airy feel, like fairies dancing, so gracefully effortless, should do well in the contest!
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Date: 5/21/2020 1:49:00 PM
Nicely done though you could insert two spaces between "reeling" and "graciously" to balance it out! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/21/2020 10:14:00 AM
what lovely imagery Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2020 7:49:00 AM
Pretty and charming...radiant the waltz. I could picture them in nature.
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Date: 5/21/2020 4:23:00 AM
Beautiful to see in the garden, a sure sign of summer. Good luck in the contest Tom
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