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Redwood Song

Roughened, reddened fibrous shell Vibrant life still fresh and green Thickened feet and arms Embrace the stars and sky Growing higher every day Thousands, years gone by Yet still the old one reaches on Urged on by the rain and sun And life that courses up so high Some time ago a friend, in wind he fell Crashing to the ground in end Like thunder shaking all the earth around The shout went out He’s gone His roots jut up in silhouette A tombstone of regret Like a wise old sage The sentinel still stands How long? Many others died In storms and fires through the years But the old one presses on The rain dripping down a million tears So strong and tall the redwood grows New threats rang out and echoed Old fellows thundered to the earth The axe and saws of men Laid low the works of thousand years Young ones quickly took their place And began again the age old race How long will all the old ones last They must go on, they’re holding fast Ocean breeze brings soft melodies refrain Can you hear the redwood song They are singing once again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2015 4:36:00 PM
John, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:27:00 PM
JOHN, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/15/2015 9:31:00 AM
John,:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:47:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, John :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:29:00 AM
Hi John, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 11:51:00 PM
John , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:51:00 PM
G'day John... Lets hope that common sense prevails and the old redwoods continue to be admired and the young redwoods are allowed to follow suit with no dollar signs upon them. Thankyou John - Lindsay
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