Rednecker Car Wash

. Pouring down rain Dirty car on carporch Husband_back car out needs washing (Non-traditional Senryu)

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Matt Hunt

Date: 5/22/2011 5:47:00 PM

Being from Arkansas, I have actually seen this done. True story, my friend broke his steering wheel on his boat. So instead of buying a new steering wheel, he decided to use something else. He took a broom handle and duct tape.....True story. Btw loved this non-traditional Senryu. Great job:D Matt

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 1:06:00 PM

Awesome one Sara, enjoyed tonight ;) Wilma

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/2/2011 9:49:00 AM

hahahaha take the er off of redneck. john

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2011 11:09:00 PM

hahaha, reminds me of those rednecked jokes that one comic always tells.,.. You might be a redneck if you.....Good one, Sara.

James Foulk

Date: 4/1/2011 12:02:00 PM

i worked for a car wash one time, i was there for 3 or 4 days and i left. because everytime it rain, we got sent home, so this poem i can relate to. i really enjoyed it.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/1/2011 7:36:00 AM

You have captured the picture clearly in those three lines Sara.Nice write---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 6:44:00 AM

Totally see this one clearly Sara.. glad u reposted it my friend.. free car wash is the good old rain.. I wash my car myself for exercise ..have to try it in the rain sometimes.. like today with the rain snow mix falling luv.. happy weekend with luv..

Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 5:44:00 PM

Good one, Sara. Elaine

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2011 12:10:00 PM

Hi Sara, you might want to delete this one because the other post of your poem has more comments on it already. Sometimes we encounter technical glitches and don't realize a poem has been posted twice. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/31/2011 11:21:00 AM

you have this posted twice.