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In the ashes of pain The hurt of you Tears flowing down In the walls of my heart Ache washed pain Washing away the heartache Rain clouds upon the night sky In howling wind they keep falling You put the dagger to my heart Straight through You tore my life asunder My heart in you shut down Putting me in hell The love of you died Within my soul My heart reborn Like the phoenix Out of its ashes You shine Like a burning flame Love will shine A fairytale path Like a sprinkling of dust Wishing from love afar In the clouds a light shines You are my candle In the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/6/2013 4:07:00 PM
Candle in the wind..I love this kind of ending to such a deep powerful poem..Reminds me of one of my faviurite singers Elton john and beautiful queen of hearts ..Princess Di...Outstanding verses.Thanks for reading my humble posts..always appreciated..Goodnight
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 4:38:00 PM
I WOULDNT MISS THEM FOR THE WORLD I WHISPER TO YOU NITE HAVE A BEAUTIFUL ONE SEE YOU TOMORROW SWEET DREAMS
Date: 9/6/2013 3:44:00 PM
Beautifully written, Liam... There is always light after the darkness, if we keep looking for it....Wonderful work!....You might like my new poem, "Tears In Heaven"....Thank you for the sweet comments on my poetry. It really means so much to me!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 4:35:00 PM
THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/6/2013 2:53:00 PM
Hey Liam buddy, May that candle forever burn for you my friend.. Regards, Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 3:01:00 PM
KEN THANK YOU DEEPLY MY FRIEND HEARTFELT APPRECIATED OLD FRIEND
Date: 9/6/2013 2:20:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 2:59:00 PM
THE PLEASURE LIES IN YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEEPLY

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