Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Soup Social
Member Poems
Member Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Poetry Resources
Home » Poems » Punnia Viswan Bhatia » Redemption

Redemption

~~Redemption~~ Set me free From the haunting memories Set me free From the taunting thoughts Set me free From the recurring nightmares Humiliated, beat-up, pelted Learning the art of self-reproach They say I am sinful They say I am the reason They say I am wronged Am I, are you sure? Someone laughed at me back in the mirror out there! -Puvi (23/8/2016)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Robinson Jr. Avatar
Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/25/2016 5:03:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
This poem is very enlightening, RSSE. The first step to wholeness begins with forgiving one self. Let the mirror to the soul speak. Excellent poem, lady. Love and many blessings.
Login to Reply
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/27/2016 9:38:00 PM
block poet
thank you Freddie :) I should read your poems soon, i guess; we share similar thoughts! :)))) a bit tied up with work. thank you for the blessings :) God bless. Love & peace to you friend
Babbit Avatar
Dm Babbit
Date: 9/8/2016 11:09:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Be free, were you laughing at yourself ?
Login to Reply
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 9/8/2016 11:18:00 AM
block poet
thank you DM. yeah, I am afraid that I was laughing at myself ;) :)
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/23/2016 8:52:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Thought provoking! Who is this one who laughed behind your back? I am sharpening my sword! ok maybe just my pen! :)
Login to Reply
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 8/23/2016 11:00:00 PM
block poet
Thank you Arthur for the very lovely and encouraging comment :) I think it was my Self, who laughed at my self-reproach ;) :p love and peace..
Fleming Avatar
John Fleming
Date: 8/23/2016 1:20:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Hhmmm.. Certainly thought provoking - I rather enjoyed it! A seven methinks - My best regards, RoSSE! :) john
Login to Reply
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 8/23/2016 8:49:00 PM
block poet
Thank you John for the inspiration.love and regards..rosse :)

Book: Shattered Sighs