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Redemption

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Redemption David J Walker The unrelenting quest For the rest of What was meant to be said The best intentions Mislaid Mislead conventions Discarded convictions Colors of lost horizons Least of the left last rites The Vespers of whispers The worshipers The shoplifters all Seek redemption Before the end of the end Of the evening To come

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Gary Radice

Date: 8/26/2022 5:32:00 AM

I'm still unsure as to why your work doesn't garner more comments than it does David. Your words make me think, listen and then re-read each time using the meter / cadence in which you recited. Great work. Cheers - Gary

David Walker
Date: 8/26/2022 6:22:00 AM

Gary, Thank you. Admittedly, the way I write is not for everyone. I appreciate your thoughts and comments.