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Redamancy

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For the  Redamancy Poetry Contest of Suzette Richards

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I have to ask you why you have not kissed me yet. Your mouth tantalizes me. I am a shy guy, but now I feel emboldened to taste your sweet honeyed lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/6/2024 6:34:00 AM
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Love it Andrea. I enjoy the updated vocabulary (shy guy) ;) Congratulations! :)
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Beata Agustin
Date: 3/5/2024 1:08:00 AM
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Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this delightful and delighting sedoka. God bless you.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/4/2024 12:17:00 AM
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Congratulations on your placement, Andrea. You hit the ground running by opening the poem with the question upfront - an unusual take on the brief which ensured you a placement in this contest. Regards, Suzette
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Bill Baker
Date: 2/26/2024 10:54:00 PM
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Sounds like a sweet kiss. I'll take a couple of those, because I am a shy guy too. Hugs, Bill
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The Situation
Date: 2/26/2024 6:08:00 PM
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I take this as a real thing. But, your a guy?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/26/2024 10:45:00 PM
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I am taking the role of a guy. It's just a poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/26/2024 7:01:00 AM
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Oh, so beautifully romantic, Andrea. A moment of love's touch elegantly captured.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/26/2024 5:22:00 AM
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so lovely and questionning, sentiments are so subtle, thanks poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/25/2024 10:28:00 PM
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Whoa!! Very passionate one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/25/2024 6:48:00 PM
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Cute and sweet. Love write. Very well delivered .
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 2/25/2024 4:04:00 PM
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Wow, Andrea, such a sweet haiku full of passion and emotion. - Blessings Daniel
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 2/25/2024 3:02:00 PM
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Love it. God bless you always and I hope it is a winner. Much love and wishes for the best for you always, love, Gina
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