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Sedoka Poem Type (Simply Explained & Examples)

Across the deep sea This short letter flies, love filled. How I long for your strong arms. My arms grow weaker_ Without you to fill them, and My lips want cherry kisses.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 2/24/2024 6:54:00 AM
Oh, this is sweet Sara. Perfect form! hugs :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/24/2024 1:45:00 PM
Why, thank you, Linda. Love the smiley face. Sara K
Date: 2/22/2024 6:50:00 PM
A lovely Sedoka Sara, absense truly does make one’s heart grow stronger… Beryl
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 4:22:00 AM
So I have heard, Beryl. I had an aunt that used to say that. Her husband was in the military. Sara K
Date: 2/22/2024 3:05:00 PM
I hadn't heard of this form, but yesterday and today it seems to be flourishing. :-) You write vibrant love poetry, my friend. I enjoyed reding your poetry today. Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 4:21:00 AM
Contest going on, Bill. I know you will write a very nice one. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 2/22/2024 1:39:00 PM
Hmm, I think I like this one even better if for the contest.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 2:39:00 PM
Why, thank you, Andrea. I think I entered one. Sara K
Date: 2/22/2024 9:19:00 AM
May you obtain those cherry kisses in abandance.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 9:22:00 AM
Victor, maybe, just maybe in Cherry Blossom time. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 2/22/2024 5:15:00 AM
beautiful Sedoka, Sara K--one filled with longing and sadness. Well done...enjoy your day, Sara B
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K

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