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red wine is on my mind. freedom will i find. do i need glasses or m i BLIND. y do i seem To never know the time. red wine is what i feel. wish i was like this eternal u know the deal. my love it can steal. is this real. red wine is sweet. i set n the hear the BIRD's tweet. no shoe's on my feet. the roof is my seat. red wine is soothing n has me on my TOE'S. thought's n my mind no1 know's. my lung n my heart grow's. set back n watch the cloud shows. smoke it blow's. red wine is almost done. MAN was that fun. on the shingle's n the sun. RED WINE NUMBER #1.................................... KEELEY FRYE

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Date: 8/3/2009 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week Keeley . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on the feature!!!!!
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:45:00 AM
Keeley - congrats on having your poetry featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 4/19/2009 12:46:00 PM
Ever hear of Boones Farm??? Very fun write! Great Job! Hugs &Peace,Robin
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:17:00 AM
This poem brings back some teen year memories. One day, when no one was home, A friend and I took a small round table with two chairs and put them on top of our flatroofed detached garage. We had a tea party. The next day at school, a penthouse neighbor asked me what we were doing on the roof. It was wonderful and free up there!!! Thanks for the memory. He was a good young man...never forward and always respectful. Lost now to time and distance. God Bless and welcome to poetry soup.
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