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Red Sun

Red sun rising in the east A ball of fire in the distance Gleaming into orange-yellow sphere Rising higher in the sky Flashing into yellow heat through the day Till soft moon forms and gorgeous sun hides her face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/14/2013 4:44:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Karen !! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/7/2013 7:45:00 PM
Deep imagination, Karen. Enjoyed poem overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 7/7/2013 2:14:00 PM
I like the transforming sun...very nice imagery and verse...
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