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Red Sun

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Red Sun

Gory clouds, glossy effect
Like an ended Spartan war
Fueled by a magical orb
In a robe of blood.

29/06/2013
Contest: Red Sun

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  1. Date: 6/30/2013 2:06:00 PM
    very dramatic verse Goodness, you suit your name, xxx

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:11:00 PM
    yours is very different from the others. I like the comparison to spartans. they had some truly gory wars!! Good luck in the contest, Goodness.