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Red Sun

Glows softly behind those clouds,
Light rays touch everyone's heart,
A new fresh morning it brings,
Created by God..

June 27,2013
Russell Sivey Red Sun
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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Jelina.... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Very nice one..congratulations

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:03:00 PM
    Very well done. Warm images with peaceful feel. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:15:00 AM
    This was really nice. Though, I think "Rays touch" or "Ray touches" sounds more fitting. Either way, I like what you did here. Nice work!

    Rhian Avatar Jelina Rhian
    Date: 6/28/2013 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking time to read and leaved some comments on my piece, I'll look into the suggestions you made...Jelina