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Red Sun

Glows softly behind those clouds, Light rays touch everyone's heart, A new fresh morning it brings, Created by God.. June 27,2013 Russell Sivey Red Sun Member Contest

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:31:00 PM

Jelina.... congrats *****SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 7/23/2013 9:40:00 PM

Very nice one..congratulations

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/23/2013 6:03:00 PM

Very well done. Warm images with peaceful feel. Congratulations on your win :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/27/2013 6:15:00 AM

This was really nice. Though, I think "Rays touch" or "Ray touches" sounds more fitting. Either way, I like what you did here. Nice work!

Samberine Everose
Date: 6/28/2013 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for taking time to read and leaved some comments on my piece, I'll look into the suggestions you made...Jelina