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Red Sun

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Red Sun

 
Stirring creatures from slumber
a soft glow of crimson red
casts long rays of golden flint
over face of earth
~*~

For Russell's "Red Sun" Contest
6/24/13

 

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  1. Date: 11/25/2013 4:09:00 PM
    love this one, my friend - just dropping by to say hi. I'm getting worried that your xmas & birthday gifts have been lost in the post - will scan the receipt of posting for you but not sure if that will help trace it. If the pack doesn't arrive in, say, another 1 - 2 weeks, please choose something from Amazon and I'll get it sent to you xxx

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:33:00 PM
    Annalise.... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Very beautiful....congratulations

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Stirring creatures...golden flint. Great lines and crisp original imagery. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:07:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win Annalise

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Annalise, a red glowing write. Great imagery - "casts long rays of golden flint" love it :)

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:09:00 PM
    beautiful, my friend x - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:59:00 AM
    utterly serene... a perfect moment masterfully penned..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Ah, so beautiful. Tremendous setting, Annalise! :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Nice..its a pretty picture. BG

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:20:00 AM
    Excellent. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:28:00 AM
    Stunning visuals Annalise, all the best for Russell's contest :) love & hugs Wilma