Red Sun

Gods weary red sleepy eye opening, turning darkness back to lovely blue bird skies watching over me ©Donna Jones 6-23-2013

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Robert Johnson

Date: 7/29/2013 11:39:00 AM

To every day there is a reason and now I understand. The only thing I need to know is that it's by God's hand.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:39:00 AM

a wow poem. Big congrats.

Judy Konos

Date: 7/25/2013 2:39:00 PM

That's a WOW WOW thanks.

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:29:00 PM

Donna.... congrats *****SKAT

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/23/2013 5:55:00 PM

Nice imagery with a sense of comfort. Congratulations on your win.

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/23/2013 12:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Joseph May

Date: 7/23/2013 11:08:00 AM

congrats on a fine win Donna

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/11/2013 12:23:00 AM

Oh, I like the wording here Donna ;} thank you for coming to read my Living Life ;}

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/29/2013 9:30:00 AM

Very nice having cool in hot Sun's adoration. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/27/2013 5:48:00 PM

Pretty way to describe a morning sunrise.

Jack Jordan

Date: 6/27/2013 6:42:00 AM

Beautiful... Good luck in the contest... Jack

David De La Croes

Date: 6/27/2013 2:30:00 AM

I love the confident faith with shines through your poem, Donna... Go well, David

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/26/2013 8:13:00 AM

Hi Donna, great write.GOD is there.

April Gabriella

Date: 6/26/2013 2:23:00 AM

I really like this !Good luck in the contest. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2013 12:51:00 PM

engrossed by this winsome piece... splendid, donna..:) huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 6/25/2013 9:48:00 PM

Thank you very much....you give me wings to keep trying...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/25/2013 12:23:00 PM

OH, MD......Yes, He is watching over us. How beautiful this is! Missed ya! Hope all is well....Good luck in the contest!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/25/2013 9:51:00 PM

Hi beautiful....yes things are OK....so busy is all...glad you liked it..you know this is obviously my first try at this form but its the only way to learn..right?

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/25/2013 10:12:00 AM

Beautiful

Donna Jones
Date: 6/25/2013 9:51:00 PM

Thanks!

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/25/2013 10:03:00 AM

Very...very cool, Donna. I'm a fan of these little jags. Good luck in the contest. Oh, and the rattler you asked about...it was a rare occasion in which I wasn't carrying a pistol, so I bashed his head with a stick of firewood...took some pictures...then ate him...ha...I'm such a redneck..;)

Donna Jones
Date: 6/25/2013 9:52:00 PM

Yummy...and hatband too....and I is one too