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Red Sun

I squint at the big red sun 
In a sky full of pink clouds
And wonder what it looks like
On other planets

For Russell’s Red Sun contest, 21st June

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Hi Jack.... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:31:00 PM
    Great take..wonderful picture..congratulations

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:53:00 PM
    So many dimensions in this short poem. Very nice. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 5:20:00 PM
    I love the squinting image.... and the beauty of wonder in your poem... I wonders if others admire on other planets... we are not alone... LOL... love it...LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Good luck in the contest. This poem should be a winner

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Great perspective! Ingeniously done... Jake

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 2:57:00 AM
    Great Poem Jack. Good luck in the contest. AO

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Nice poem.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Great curious mind that wrote this sure to win work..Enjoyed reading it this evening..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visits..Sara

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 4:21:00 PM
    I love your view Jack, now move on over so I can view and wonder by your side and squint my eyes without to the red sun... hugs *SKAT

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 3:26:00 PM
    GOOD way to think of it, as an imagining. WEll, Jack. I am seeing yours last and I need to get off RIGHT now. See ya later, my friend. I am off to a late matinee!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:57:00 PM
    Hi Jack, I love your Dodoitsu, it is very visual, best of luck, yes I wonder what sun other planets see, thanks so much for all your comments on my poetry, as you can tell I was on a writing spree, day off, so I just went for it, oh I had a scare with Violet Kitty a few days ago, but the vet said each day is a blessing when you are a sixteen year old cat, said she will be okay for now, let her eat and do whatever she wants and to just ignore the lump on her side, too old for surgery,