Red Sun

Eyes feasting on bold color against a waking dark sky, clouds near tinged with bleeding hue, the red sun rises ©6/21/13 Written for Russell Sivey's contest: Red Sun

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2013 4:33:00 PM

Ahhh!! Excellent poetic quality..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:24:00 PM

Debra.... congrats *****SKAT

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/23/2013 5:43:00 PM

You painted a glorious scene. Congratulations on your win :)

Donna Jones

Date: 7/23/2013 4:43:00 PM

Very vivid picture...nice..congratulations

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/23/2013 3:36:00 PM

Congrats Debra. You've painted this well.

John Posey

Date: 7/23/2013 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your perfect dodoitsu... beautifully done....Jake.

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/22/2013 2:03:00 PM

Hello Debra, Hope all is well. It gets a little diconcerting when it get's to be a spell. Hope to read something new soon. Peace. :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/4/2013 8:14:00 PM

Debra, exquisite imagery and verse. You should do very well in the contest :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/3/2013 4:00:00 PM

Hello Friend. Short on time. Get busy. Let's read another from you. :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 6/27/2013 6:22:00 PM

Well done. Beautiful piece. "clouds near tinged with bleeding hue" Avery powerful line.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2013 7:09:00 AM

Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence is always welcomed..Sara

John Posey

Date: 6/24/2013 7:06:00 PM

Nice work, Debra... should do well....Jake

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/24/2013 3:04:00 AM

I really enjoyed this piece of yours. Well done on your write and Good luck in the contest. AO

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/23/2013 2:20:00 PM

Deep in the midst of dawning views. A poet wakes the world. With phrasings touched with crimson hues. A pictures been unfurled. Good on ya mate. :) Hows that for some Minnesota Aussie. :)