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Red Sun

~~ I stand upon jagged rocks, two birds dance with a red sun, wild water echoes below, moments lingering . . . ~~ June 21, 2013 Dodoitsu For the contest, Red Sun

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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:11:00 PM
    wowowow, this is about the best I have seen in this particular contest, Constance. a FAVE, and wow was I ever surprised to see my win in your contest. THANK YOU!!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Great entry... Will do well.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:06:00 AM
    This is sure a winning material to me. Well done Constance and good luck. AO

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:04:00 PM
    love this

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 11:16:00 AM
    Good work ...! As Carrie said..what a great picture. BG

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:26:00 AM
    I feel I am looking at a wonderful painting !! And I want to have it for my home! :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:05:00 AM
    This is beautiful, you transported me to this majestic view. I am always amazed at the power of words creating pictures in my mind. You are a skilled creator of pictures.