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Red Sun

I stand upon jagged rocks, two birds dance with a red sun, wild water echoes below, moments lingering . . . ______________________ June 21, 2013 Poetry/Dodoitsu/Red Sun Copyright Protected, ID 06-487-486-21 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2013 11:11:00 PM

wowowow, this is about the best I have seen in this particular contest, Constance. a FAVE, and wow was I ever surprised to see my win in your contest. THANK YOU!!!

John Posey

Date: 6/24/2013 7:07:00 PM

Great entry... Will do well.... Jake

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/24/2013 3:06:00 AM

This is sure a winning material to me. Well done Constance and good luck. AO

Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2013 2:04:00 PM

love this

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/21/2013 11:16:00 AM

Good work ...! As Carrie said..what a great picture. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/21/2013 8:26:00 AM

I feel I am looking at a wonderful painting !! And I want to have it for my home! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/21/2013 8:05:00 AM

This is beautiful, you transported me to this majestic view. I am always amazed at the power of words creating pictures in my mind. You are a skilled creator of pictures.