Red Rum

fire, RAGE, frustration, rumble, fear i cry for you,i pity you Pitiful you pitiful me, numerous lies. Who to believe? me,i scream BELIEVE MY TESTIMONY, i will no longer hide from your lies, Its time for the truth, it'll help you, FIRE, RAGE FRUSTRATION, RUMBLE, FEAR, Lie all you want the truths here RED RUM MURDER she wrote Lies spilled from her tongue, EVERY WORD SHE SPOKE

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Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 7:08:00 PM

Marcella, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Marcella Mann

Date: 8/19/2014 7:00:00 PM

thank you all so much more to come

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2014 12:23:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Marcella - I choose your first very well written and deep poem :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 6:56:00 PM

Marcella,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/13/2014 5:30:00 PM

Very deep and powerful write! Way to go, my friend! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita